"Out here, with no distractions other than our work, our differences had grown large, all encompassing. We’d drifted apart, isolated in our close proximity. "
Excellent line. Encapsulates the state of your relationship two sentences. I like that. I'm not a scientist, but appreciate them very much. Mixed with admission that he had no family, no God ... and one of his last thoughts would be of his mother and mother-in-law ... they say that's what men do. Well done.
"Out here, with no distractions other than our work, our differences had grown large, all encompassing. We’d drifted apart, isolated in our close proximity. "
Excellent line. Encapsulates the state of your relationship two sentences. I like that. I'm not a scientist, but appreciate them very much. Mixed with admission that he had no family, no God ... and one of his last thoughts would be of his mother and mother-in-law ... they say that's what men do. Well done.
Thank you! I'm glad you found this.
You’re very knowledgeable, and yet it felt approachable. I feel like I understood what I read to the degree that it affected the story. Well done.
Thank you! I deepened heavily on articles that knew their stuff.
SciFi grounded in humanity. Love it.
Thank you!
Solid sci-fi. :)
Absolutely spot on! It’s so good to read proper hard SF
Thank you! I appreciate that more than you know.
I can guess- I write (or attempt to write) Hard SF poetry 😎
Love it, love the tech details, wouldn’t remove even one. IMHO
Thank you. It’s hard to remember what was removed. That was nearly twenty years ago. lol Where does the time go?